雅思考官写作满分范文

雅思写作一直是很多中国考生的“软肋”所在，花了最多的时间，却收效甚微。有很多院校会对雅思单项做要求，尤其是写作和口语部分，会限定考分，这就使得很多考生很焦急。今天，小站给大家带来母语为英语的雅思考官写的满分范文两篇，同时对第二篇范文进行注解，希望可以帮助到大家。

雅思写作满分范文第一篇：

题目：

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

考官范文：

As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagantlifestyles with huge houses and cars.

Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibilityof governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.

Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform. in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of thesefactors may justify the huge earnings.

Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicatesthat our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.

雅思写作满分范文第二篇：

题目：As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work， job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.

What factors contribute to job satisfaction?

How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

考官范文：

Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feelings about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole， and because of this， job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person.

Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly， a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work， so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect. A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. Secondly， when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities， for example， then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.

Of course not everyone enjoys their work. Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality. Some jobs are repetitive and boring， and labour relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction.

However， even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work， I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job. If the factors identified above are implemented， then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job satisfaction.

范文分析：

1、文章结构：结构

一般说来，在段落之间，没有特别的连接词，暗指后面一段在支持前面一段的主题句。

段落之间的关联词：

在第3段的段首，考官使用Of course， 表示切换话题。这个词可以理解为“然而”。

在第4段的段首，考官使用了However， 展示本段是上一段的转折，即论证的补充。这个词组可以理解为“尽管如此”

一般说来，在一个段落内的句子之间，没有特别的连接词，暗指后面一句在支持主题句。

段落中的路标词：在第1段中，考官使用了So来突出主题句。这个词可以理解为“总之”。

2、语法

这篇考官范文在句式上最经典之处就是充分利用了英文的“状语从句”，几乎所有的状语从句在这篇文章中都很好地体现出来了。

全文使用的长难句型如下：

If…， then…（条件状语）

because(原因状语)

… if … because ….（条件状语 + 原因状语）

When…，then…（时间状语）

…， so…（结果状语）

Even though…,…（让步状语）

I think it is not unrealistic to…（我觉得这件事并非不真实……双重否定表示肯定）

…， and…（并列句）

neither…nor…（否定并列句）