雅思写作备考需要注意的几个地方

雅思大作文部分一般是要求写作250字，对于大部分考生写到这个数字难度较大，主要是在作文结构以及语言组织上不是很合理。下面是小编给大家分析的几个写作需要注意的地方，大家可以作为参考。

1、第一易错点错误：Government claims that teacher should teach student some self-protection skills.

错误分析：可数名词不可“裸用”。

在正式英文写作里，凡是常规的可数名词，必须在前面有限定词，比如冠词 a/an/the，物主代词 my/their/your 等等，指示代词this/that 等等。否则，这个可数名词就必须用复数。

在这个句子中，government要么用the government，要么用government，后面的teacher和student都一样要加上复数。

正确：The government claims that teachers should teach students some self-protection skills.

2、第二易错点错误：Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.

错误分析：动词原形不能作主语。

而且在这个句子中如果work做了动词，后面can enhance也是动词，就出现双谓语的情况，因此把work改成working.

正确：Working at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.

3、第三易错点错误：Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.

错误分析：词性使用错误。

different的词性为形容词，而修饰形容词或者动词的时候应该用副词。

正确：Intelligent students should not be treated differently by their teachers.

4、第四易错点错误：A lot of houses were collapsed in the earthquake.

错误分析：句中出现双谓语

句中 collapse已经为动词，再加be动词之后就变成了被动结构，此处be纯属多余。

正确：A lot of houses collapsed in the earthquake.

5、第五易错点错误：Letters were the most important way of communication in the past , e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.

错误分析：这个句子的句型并不属于简单句、并列句或者复合句中的任何一种的定义。

因为出现了两套动词，因此我们可以将这个句子变成并列句，而前后两句之间是对比关系，所以我们可以在中间加对比连词或副词，比如while。

正确：Letters were the most important way of communication in the past while now e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.

虽然雅思的作文并不要求大家做到语法全对，但过于低级的语法错误，也会直接影响我们的作文成绩，以上雅思写作相关内容希望可以给大家备考带来帮助。