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怎样实现雅思写作多元化

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2023-11-03 17:33:07

众所周知,雅思写作的四个评分标准中Grammatical Ranges and Accuracy、Lexical Resources充分体现了雅思写作的基础点也是加分点为词汇和语法的多样性。下面就来说说怎样实现雅思写作多元化,大家千万别错过。

怎样实现雅思写作多元化

一、怎样实现雅思写作多元化

1、词性的多样性

有调查指出,中国学生在作文中最常出现的词性为动词,因为我们脑中时刻紧记着以前语文老师要求的只有用动词才能写出生动的文章,才能体现我们的博览群书。然而英语中却不尽然。通过对大多高分范文的分析,不难发现,除了动词词组的运用,各种的名词的使用更得考官的青睐,更能体现外国人的文风。拿小作文的发展趋势做例子,大家都知道增加、降低等动词的表达,如increasesteadily, decrease sharply等,但转换一种方式用名词的形式表达,就更显得多样了,如experience a steadyincrease, undergo a sharpdecrease。而如“surface”一词,学生经常只会用它的名词用法“......的表面”,却从来不用它的动词形式。如果你留心原版杂志和阅读材料,它的动词用法无处不在。

2、同义词多样性

在写作中,如果一个相同的词在250字的文中出现了不下三次,那么作为学生自己,也会觉得自己的文章没有可看性,更别提考官,可见此学生语言功底一般,又怎么拿得到高分。而如果一篇文章,关于同个词却有三四中表达方法,无疑给这篇文章加分不少。其实同义词也是展现一个学生英语水平的一个媒介。中国学生最常用的形容词就是good,不管是修饰什么名词,用上再说,殊不知这已经给这篇文章打了个相对低的起评分,所以如何来表达不同的“好”呢?我们就可以用excellent、marvellous、gorgeous、splendid、wonderful等。再如不要一想到“越来越多”就用“moreand more”尝试用“an increasing number”这样不同的词来表达,势必会给平淡的文章增添亮点。

3、句式结构的多样性

用丰富多彩的句型,也是雅思写作能得高分的标准之一。例如有这样一个句型:“If we don't recognizethe...”,我们是否可以替换为:"Failure to recognize...",再如 “sth. happened in1998.”,我们也可以替换为“1998 saw sthhappening.”,这样显得更加的地道。此处还推荐学生能用不同的从句写出漂亮的句子,为文章加分。当然,这并不是意味着整篇文章都是复合句或并列句,如果能很好的做到长短句结合,使文章通顺连贯,也是能得到考官喜欢的。

二、好的雅思作文开头方法

1、适当的复述一下原题,然后再表达自己的立场和观点

“So long as no laws are broken, there is nothing unethical about doingwhatever you need to do to promote existing products or to create newproducts.”

The speaker asserts that in creating and marketing products, companies actethically merely by not violating any laws. Although the speaker’sposition isnot wholly insupportable, far more compelling arguments can be made for holdingbusinesses to higher ethical standards than those required by the letter of thelaw.

2、适当的复述一下原题,然后只出话题内容的复杂性,再来表达自己的立场和观点

Most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of anysociety’s past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground thatmodern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes.

The issue of whether to raze an old, historic building to make way forprogress is a complex one, since it involves a conflict between our interest inpreserving our culture, tradition, and history and a legitimate need to createpractical facilities that serve current utilitarian purposes. In my view, thefinal judgment should depend on a case-by-case analysis of two key factors.

3、适当的复述一下原题,然后指明题目中隐藏的假设条件,再表明自己的立场和观点

“Clearly, government has a responsibility to support the arts. However, ifthat support is going to produce anything of value, government must place norestrictions on the art that is produced.”

The speaker here argues that government must support the arts but at thesame time impose no control over what art is produced. The implicit rationalefor government intervention in the arts is that, without it, cultural declineand erosion of our social fabric will result. However, I find no empiricalevidence to support this argument, which in any event is unconvincing in lightof more persuasive arguments that government should play no part in eithersupporting or restricting the arts.

4、适当的复述一下原题,稍作让步,再表达自己的立场和观点

“Work greatly influences people’s personal lives—their special interests,their leisure activities, even their appearance way from the work place.”

The speaker claims that our jobs greatly influence our personal interests,recreational activities and even appearance. While I agree that the personallives of some people are largely determined by their work, in my view it wouldbe a mistake to draw this conclusion generally. In my observation, the extent towhich occupation influences personal life depends on the nature of the work, andhow central the work is to one’s sense of self.

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